Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Haikus: Spring cycle

Vinka is blooming
Loud among the emerald leaves
Deep shadows beneath

Grapefruit with a bruise
It has no seeds inside it
No hope of new growth

The pinto bean grows
Out of a jar filled with dirt
Green vines; a dry source
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 14, 2015 at 1:00 PM

    I like how you described the plants, then added a kind of sad twist at the end like "no hope for new growth." Nice work.

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  2. UnknownApril 14, 2015 at 4:06 PM

    Oh! These are very nice haikus!

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  3. Sofie RApril 14, 2015 at 8:08 PM

    These are cool, I love how you used twists in the endings. Nice job :)

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  4. AnonymousApril 16, 2015 at 8:46 AM

    I love the grapefruit one, especially. A nice twist ending.

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