Tuesday, April 14, 2015

Haikus: Spring cycle

Vinka is blooming
Loud among the emerald leaves
Deep shadows beneath

Grapefruit with a bruise
It has no seeds inside it
No hope of new growth

The pinto bean grows
Out of a jar filled with dirt
Green vines; a dry source


  1. I like how you described the plants, then added a kind of sad twist at the end like "no hope for new growth." Nice work.

  2. These are cool, I love how you used twists in the endings. Nice job :)

  3. I love the grapefruit one, especially. A nice twist ending.